xxKeroMayesxx's Reviews

["Symphony"]

No words, yet some much is said.

[Edwins Space Adventure With Hector v1.2.1]

Solid beginning and end. Bit difficult to maneuver and I wasn't for sure what to collect or what to avoid and the closing after the boss battle went by too fast. Leaves little room for savoring the win from the players perspective, but it's a completed level. 8 or 9 more like this and could have pretty descent game.

EdwinJameson responds:

Hey, thank you for your comment, i definitely plan to improve and make more levels but i wanted to first see if people enjoyed the game enough to go that extra step as to make more levels, also this is my first time making a game so the flaws are to be expected, but this is at least the 20th version I've made to get this far so i appreciate you taking the time to play and analyze the game to provide constructive criticism. Cant wait to hear back from you when i make an update :)

[jebus.jpg]

The halo illuminating the rest of the scene is brilliant. The proportions are a little off putting (specifically the gun), but over all it's a nice piece.

[We All Have Our Demons]

I'm not a big fan of the art style or I'd offer more, but it is a great likeness to Jensen Ackles. (A.K.A. Dean Winchester from Supernatural for those who may not have known) Awesome reference.

[Robotboy and Blossom]

Very accurate line work. The shading is spot on and I even enjoy the glimmer of reflection. Props on the background. Though subtle, it adds for a bit of motion... and nothing says "Love" like an attack hug from a PPG.

Now I give 4.5 out of 5 stars because, perhaps I'm a little jaded to seeing some originality to other peoples creations, but these look identical to the characters from their individual shows. Its a beautiful piece; please don't misunderstand my words for any less than a critique.

Great job.

AldrinHD responds:

Thanks man! I appreciate your views and critique. :)

My main was originality for this one. I wanted to come up with something no one else probably would.